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So I see a lot of good in this image, but also some bad. So I am going to start with the bad. There is a problem in this image that I s...


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So if I made a comic starting Fotia and Happy Pony in a modern world (meaning work cars) would it be better for me to make the cat-pons or essentially elves, angles, humans and angle elves (witch would work the same when it comes to magic)

If I did the cat-pons, I would bet constantly working to prevent IP infringement, and if I did the other option, there would be a few things that I would not be able to do, but are not essential to the story I have in mind.

Also, if I made this comic, it would have no IP from Hasbro (meaning none of the names, locations, charters, stories, or branding from products made by Hasbro, including MLP) or any other legal entity unless the use is protected under fair use. (Trade marks, such as characters, fictional locations, and the name of a show, never fall under fair use, so I would need explicit permission from Hasbro to have a character from the show in the comic.)
The reasoning is because I intend to promote and sell this comic, and I don't want to risk a cease and decist order from Hasbro, and I especially want to eliminate any risk of a suit (witch is high when it comes to trade mark infringement)
Big day tomorrow.
going to everfree.
Quick tip, when booking a room for a con, book early.
I am paying extra because I didn't.

Also, I am going to Everfree NW
Anyone else going?
So I see a lot of good in this image, but also some bad. So I am going to start with the bad.
There is a problem in this image that I see in a lot of pictures that people draw. The faces of just a little off. The specific problem is that the eyes are a little too far apart, and those tiny lines just next to the inside end of the eyelash only emphasizes the problem. The reason that it is a problem it because once you notice it, it distracts from the rest of the work taking away from the impact of the image. It also is the reason the Technique score is not as high as it can be.
I also can't say that it is an entirely original concept. Drawings of groups are not all that rare. Though I should also mention that I also see that some things where done differently, and differentiate it from the rest.
The coloring is nice, though the pink color added to the knees seems a bit odd to me. I like the shading, it reflects a single light source coming somewhere from the middle, though where exactly the light is coming from is not clear.
I also wish that there was a little more variety in the facial expression and eye shapes. The most unique faces are Rainbows and Pinkies.
The image also has a clear vision, but is not perfect. It could use a little work to make that vision more clear such as a more detailed background.
What I would suggest to do to improve this is to study photo-realistic illustration.
So if I made a comic starting Fotia and Happy Pony in a modern world (meaning work cars) would it be better for me to make the cat-pons or essentially elves, angles, humans and angle elves (witch would work the same when it comes to magic)

If I did the cat-pons, I would bet constantly working to prevent IP infringement, and if I did the other option, there would be a few things that I would not be able to do, but are not essential to the story I have in mind.

Also, if I made this comic, it would have no IP from Hasbro (meaning none of the names, locations, charters, stories, or branding from products made by Hasbro, including MLP) or any other legal entity unless the use is protected under fair use. (Trade marks, such as characters, fictional locations, and the name of a show, never fall under fair use, so I would need explicit permission from Hasbro to have a character from the show in the comic.)
The reasoning is because I intend to promote and sell this comic, and I don't want to risk a cease and decist order from Hasbro, and I especially want to eliminate any risk of a suit (witch is high when it comes to trade mark infringement)

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Welp
I'm working on making a company
Though that will take a while
So I guess I will just give you some vector art every once in a while while I work on that.
maybe some 3D art as well
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SkyeyPony Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2017
thanks for watch!
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Thank you for the watch!
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Mr-Pony-Man Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thx
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androspinxlrk Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
joyous day of birthing my friend :) 
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Mr-Pony-Man Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Let us all be jovial and gay.
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androspinxlrk Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
agreed, raise a glass in a toast of...um...rootbeer? yes good? rootbeer, raise a glass of rootbeer :P
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Mr-Pony-Man Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
;P
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WaveyWaves Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Happy Birthday!
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